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ƯÈ÷ ESSAY!ÀÔ¼ÒÇϱâ Àü¿¡ ºñÇØ ¸¹ÀÌ ´Ã¾ú´Ù. Á¤Çõ ½ÜÀÇ °­ÀÇ´Â Á¤¸» Å« µµ¿òÀÌ µÈ °Í °°´Ù. :D

 I personally think that our class has the nicest people in this camp. They were always kind to me and I appreciate them.

However, as our class was the highest level among all the classes, we were scolded a lot for the things ¡°that we didn¡¯t do¡±.

For the last few weeks, teachers criticized for some issues that we could not understand. I felt as if I was receiving

inappropriate and unjust treatments, but still, I loved the teachers and the students.

I was sick for a few days, but as the camp is ending, I feel better.

Thank you for ¸Þ¸®½Ü & ÀºÅÃ½Ü for taking care of me when I was feeling bad :(

I am going to miss the camp a lot!


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